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Black by Fleur Ferris

Black
Fleur Ferris
July 2016
Published by Penguin Random House

There seems to be a trend running through Australia YA fiction this year: cults and psychological thrillers. And amongst this trend is Black by Fleur Ferris, set in a mysterious, claustrophobic town Dainsfield where the main character – Black Marshall – is cursed. Three of her best friends have died in tragic accidents and the whispers are starting up again and people are keeping their distance from Black. And then Black’s formal date ends up in intensive care and the town starts to stir – like a slumbering beast being awoken by a new threat to its kingdom.

Almost immediately, readers are thrust into a world where rumours find footing and everyone in the town seems to have the memory of an elephant. Their watchful glares and the schoolkids’ cruel remarks set the scene for the novel and open up all sorts of questions for the reader. Black Marshall is a strong, resilient character who does not shy away into the shadows or feel enveloped by what others think of her. She’s a great main character, and she really drives the novel and the pacing.

This novel is quite disturbing. It has that ominous feel to it that you get during a horror movie when someone is walking through a dark house. Fleur has dropped hints and clues around the place for the reader to compile, and this keeps the reader engaged and intrigued. Fleur has also found an entertaining way to weave cults, religion, the devil, exorcisms, haunted houses and curses into one tiny book.

There were two elements of the novel that I found to be unrealistic. I didn’t quite understand the love triangle, or either of the relationships in the novel. Black and Aidan Sweet were set up to be the love story of the novel, but then Aidan ends up in intensive care for the majority of the novel. And then Ed, who is friends with Black and has been there this whole time, suddenly glides into the novel to form the love triangle. I found the relationships in Black to be distracting and unnecessary to the rest of the plot. They seemed to shift focus too quickly, and the resolution of the issue was too quick and unrealistic. Aidan was gone so quickly from the book that it felt pointless to have him there in the first place, and Ed and Black’s chemistry didn’t seem authentic enough to warrant the ending (I won’t give it away).

The second aspect of the novel that I found disappointing were the plot points in the novel that felt ‘too easy’ – they felt like they were rushed together to solve a problem. The biggest example of this is a certain speech that a character gives at a funeral at the end of the novel. It was unrealistic and forced and I found myself cringing a little bit. No one would make that speech at a funeral in real life. I also felt like Fleur used the speech to quickly solve the problem of ‘how am I going to quickly change everyone’s mind about Black? How am I going to fix this issue?’

Despite these two things, I did enjoy reading this novel. It’s a short novel and it can be read in one sitting. The pace is fast and interesting and there are enough mysteries and twists in the novel to keep the reader interested. It’s not the best YA thriller out there in 2016, but it’s still a good read.

Risk by Fleur Ferris

Taylor and Sierra have been best friends for their whole lives. But Taylor’s fed up. Why does Sierra always get what – and who – she wants? From kissing Taylor’s crush to stealing the guy they both met online for herself, Sierra doesn’t seem to notice when she hurts her friends.

So when Sierra says Jacob Jones is the one and asks her friends to cover for her while she goes to meet him for the first time, Taylor rolls her eyes.

But Sierra doesn’t come back when she said she would.

One day. Two days. Three . . .

What if Taylor’s worrying for nothing? What if Sierra’s just being Sierra, forgetting about everyone else to spend time with her new guy? When Taylor finally tells Sierra’s mum that her daughter is missing, Taylor and her friends are thrown into a dark world they never even knew existed. Can Taylor find Sierra’s abductor in time? Or should she be looking for a killer?

This novel should be (if it’s not already) introduced to the high school curriculum – it should be required reading for girls between 12-18 years old who are online and who have social media accounts.

Risk explores the ‘worst case scenario’ of a young girl talking to a stranger online – a young girl thinking that the stranger online is a young, good-looking boy, but who is actually a middle-aged predator.

Risk is different to a lot of other YA books in the market, and it comes from a lot of truth. The author used to work as a police officer and a paramedic, and has witnessed the events that she writes about. It makes this novel heartbreaking. The novel also takes a unique turn when the main character starts up a blog to raise awareness about this situation. Her friend goes missing and the blog becomes a tribute. Other girls who have experienced this same situation start to come forward, and this blog also helps girls stop themselves from making the same mistake that Sierra made.

Most reviews I’ve read have praised the fast-pace of the novel, but I actually think this is a flaw. I don’t think Fleur fleshes out Sierra enough before she gets kidnapped, so we don’t understand her character as much as we could and we therefore don’t worry about her as much as we should. Plus, Taylor’s jealousy of Sierra doesn’t seem warranted. We don’t understand it because it’s skimmed over a little too quickly. And to be fair, Sierra didn’t know that Taylor was also talking to the same guy. Taylor’s grudge didn’t seem authentic to me.

Despite the fact that I think the characterisation could’ve been better and that the plot perhaps moved too quickly, this novel serves its purpose to educate girls on the ‘what if’ scenario. What if you started talking to someone online and wanted to meet up with them? What if you did meet up with them? What if they weren’t who you thought they were? This book is supposed to be an eye-opener, and it does just that.

My Score: 7/10