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Black by Fleur Ferris

Black
Fleur Ferris
July 2016
Published by Penguin Random House

There seems to be a trend running through Australia YA fiction this year: cults and psychological thrillers. And amongst this trend is Black by Fleur Ferris, set in a mysterious, claustrophobic town Dainsfield where the main character – Black Marshall – is cursed. Three of her best friends have died in tragic accidents and the whispers are starting up again and people are keeping their distance from Black. And then Black’s formal date ends up in intensive care and the town starts to stir – like a slumbering beast being awoken by a new threat to its kingdom.

Almost immediately, readers are thrust into a world where rumours find footing and everyone in the town seems to have the memory of an elephant. Their watchful glares and the schoolkids’ cruel remarks set the scene for the novel and open up all sorts of questions for the reader. Black Marshall is a strong, resilient character who does not shy away into the shadows or feel enveloped by what others think of her. She’s a great main character, and she really drives the novel and the pacing.

This novel is quite disturbing. It has that ominous feel to it that you get during a horror movie when someone is walking through a dark house. Fleur has dropped hints and clues around the place for the reader to compile, and this keeps the reader engaged and intrigued. Fleur has also found an entertaining way to weave cults, religion, the devil, exorcisms, haunted houses and curses into one tiny book.

There were two elements of the novel that I found to be unrealistic. I didn’t quite understand the love triangle, or either of the relationships in the novel. Black and Aidan Sweet were set up to be the love story of the novel, but then Aidan ends up in intensive care for the majority of the novel. And then Ed, who is friends with Black and has been there this whole time, suddenly glides into the novel to form the love triangle. I found the relationships in Black to be distracting and unnecessary to the rest of the plot. They seemed to shift focus too quickly, and the resolution of the issue was too quick and unrealistic. Aidan was gone so quickly from the book that it felt pointless to have him there in the first place, and Ed and Black’s chemistry didn’t seem authentic enough to warrant the ending (I won’t give it away).

The second aspect of the novel that I found disappointing were the plot points in the novel that felt ‘too easy’ – they felt like they were rushed together to solve a problem. The biggest example of this is a certain speech that a character gives at a funeral at the end of the novel. It was unrealistic and forced and I found myself cringing a little bit. No one would make that speech at a funeral in real life. I also felt like Fleur used the speech to quickly solve the problem of ‘how am I going to quickly change everyone’s mind about Black? How am I going to fix this issue?’

Despite these two things, I did enjoy reading this novel. It’s a short novel and it can be read in one sitting. The pace is fast and interesting and there are enough mysteries and twists in the novel to keep the reader interested. It’s not the best YA thriller out there in 2016, but it’s still a good read.

White Tiger by Kylie Chan

Book One in the Dark Heavens Trilogy

When 28-year-old Emma Donahoe becomes a nanny to John Chen’s daughter, Simone, she does not expect to be drawn into a world of martial arts, magic, and extreme danger, where both gods and demons can exist in the mortal world.

Emma gradually realises that John Chen is no ordinary businessman and that nearly all the demons in hell would like to see him dead. John and his American bodyguard, Leo, begin to teach Emma their particular brand of martial arts and special defensive techniques … they also begin to realise that there is something that is different about Emma but exactly what it is, nobody can say.

For the first 80 pages, this novel reads like a romance. Emma accepts a full-time nanny position and can’t quite suppress her feelings for the father. At first it’s intriguing and I wanted to keep reading to see what happened, but then Emma appeared a little needy and at times, she seemed 18 and not 28.

The martial arts/fantasy side of the novel is well written, and John Chen’s character is developed and three dimensional. Kylie should be commended on the humour between Emma and Leo, Simone’s bodyguard. This book will please fantasy readers because it presents an interesting, fantasy/magical take on martial arts and Chinese mythology. Even though the novel is quite long (a little too long), it is fast-paced and the tension developed in the story is engaging for the reader.

I also loved that Kylie’s novel is inclusive of many different types of characters and promotes equality, which is something that I had read before picking up the book. White Tiger consists of characters of different ages, genders, cultural backgrounds, and sexual orientation, and that is quite rare for a fantasy novel. Actually, that’s quite rare for any novel.

My Score: 8/10